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Helper essay

1/20/2015

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I made many friends throughout the years. When I first came to the school I had only one friend, but later on I decided to meet new people.

The first friend I made was Paul Emello. I hadn't expected to make many more friends, but I was wrong. I later made another friend later in the 5th grade, and these people would help me through my trouble.

I pick up more friends and helpers along the way, and leave others behind. These people get me out of trouble and stopped me from making some of the, would be, worst decision of my life.

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Charlie Birnberg
1/21/2015 08:26:47 am

This is ok but you definitely need to add more meat. Talk more about your friendship with paul

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Fitz
2/3/2015 12:14:53 am

This does not really follow the memoir rubric

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